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08 January 2005 @ 12:34 am
Fic: Fragments  
Not my usual style here. This was supposed to be a short story as a challenge response. Unfortunately, it turned into a big fic. It's a Dan/Jan preship to ship fic so if you are 100% against ship in fiction, don't read it. Though, the story is not about the ship. The ship plays the role of subplot to the mainplot. If you can tolerate some Dan/Jan ship, then maybe you'll like the story. Those who read it get rewarded with Daniel five times over *wink wink* Special thanks to Meg for helping me the sensical stuff and the shippy material.

Anyway, here's the link for the story. It's all in one. I'll eventually break it into chapters.


Title: Fragments
Author: Moonshayde
Season: Four
Category: Main plot: Drama. Subplot: Dan/Jan ship
Spoilers: Minor ones for Legacy and Crystal Skull
Pairing/Character: Dan/Jan
Summary: SG-1 hits disaster on a standard recon mission. When the mission leaves Daniel Jackson in pieces, can Doctor Fraiser and SG-1 take his fragments and make him whole again?
Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: Stargate, Stargate SG-1 and all of its characters, titles, names, and back-story are the property of MGM/UA, Double Secret Productions, Gekko Productions, SciFi Channel, and Showtime/Viacom. All other characters, the story idea and the story itself are the sole property of the author. This story cannot be printed anywhere without the sole permission of the author. Realize this is for entertainment purposes only; no financial gain or profit has been gained from this fiction. This story is not meant to be an infringement on the rights of the above-mentioned establishments

http://www.geocities.com/celtic_mysts/Fragments.html

For those of you who read it, Hope you enjoy!
 
 
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mysticalweathermysticalweather on January 8th, 2005 02:59 am (UTC)
Puddle of Squee!
Ok. It's 5:42AM. I just finished. And, yes, I just spend the entire night reading it. *sigh* I'm gonna pay for this tomorrow (today?) but I don't care! That was soooooo great, Kerri! Squueeee!!!

And I must say, for a self-professed non-shipper, you sure can write it!

Ok, my favorite parts...

Jack leaned over to Carter. "How long—?"
"Months, Sir," she answered, cutting him off.
"And I was...?"
"Oblivious," Teal'c finished for him.
"Huh," was all Jack could say.

***

"Daniel Jackson. July 8th. I'm in the infirmary and yes, I am aware that four of me just went through the Gate,ect..." Hehe, so cute!

***

And the part with Daniel and Janet in the car! Aww!

And of course:

"I feel everything he feels."

And I was telling Meg earlier how well you had Daniel's little nuances down. :) Excellent, excellent job!!

So...can we be expecting more D/J fic in the future?? *smiles sweetly*

Ok, now I need seriously need some sleep!

:D

~Misty
Working for the Mandroid: Gazemoonshayde on January 8th, 2005 09:49 pm (UTC)
Re: Puddle of Squee!
Wow, that is a real compliment! I am so glad that you enjoyed the story! It's good to know I got it right!

*tickled pink*
pellucidpellucid on January 8th, 2005 12:50 pm (UTC)
EEEEE!!!!!!!
OH. MY. GOD.

Wow! Oh, Kerri, this was just fantastic! You did such a great job of unweaving the plot, pulling out one piece and then another at just the right pace, giving enough clues to help the reader follow but holding back enough to keep us guessing. Simply fantastic!

I also loved the characterization. Obviously, you have Daniel down so very well, but I loved all the other characters, as well, particularly Jack and Janet. And as much as I was squeeing over the Dan/Jan ship (I'll get to that in a moment), you had such splendid scenes of Jack/Janet friendship and interaction, too!!!!

Finally, if you're not a shipper, you play a damned good one on TV! ;) Again, there was just the perfect balance: the ship didn't take over or detract from the plot, but it complemented it in such a lovely way. Moody Daniel was too funny (poor guy!), and that last scene in the car... Just wow!!! And SQUEEE!!!

I have spent the better part of my Saturday afternoon reading this, but I don't regret it for a minute! Lovely, lovely, lovely!!!!
Working for the Mandroidmoonshayde on January 8th, 2005 09:52 pm (UTC)
Re: EEEEE!!!!!!!
Thanks! I am so glad you enjoyed it! It was different for me to write, but I am satisfied on how it turned out. I tried not to make it too cliche.

Thanks for reading and sharing your opinion with me.